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Artemis Engel
August 10th, 2005, 03:18 AM
This story I have written along time ago, when I was getting around to knowing what a fur was. I liked it, and decided to try my hand at writing my own story. The characters were all made to act like my friends. But they had somethng a bit different. I haven't let much read it, considering not much people read these days. But here it is anyways, hope you enjoy. ^.^

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Everyday. He's out there everyday. I feel so sorry for him. He stays out there, and no one helps him. "Hey Trek! Whatcha' doin'? You're on in 35 minutes.". The light brown fox turned to face his boss. A young Asian fox was now facing him. She had an immence beuty. Her outfit was a bit slutty. A black-see through sports bra, athong, that also was black and see through. She walked in high heel, black boots. She was also wearing a black see through vest. She walked closer to Trek.Trek doesn't like the outfit of his boss he believed that someday she'll be raped 'cause of it, but he beleived, in this line of work it's fitting. "Yes. I'll be ready in a few minutes Kila.". Trek walked away from the window and moved his way into a locker room. Kila turned her veiw from Trek and looked out the window. "Hm?... that child? is that what Trek was looking at? poor thing...", Kila left the window and went to a rack of clothes in the little room she was in and pulled down a trench coat. She flung it on as she walked to a door that lead into an alleyway.
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Trek walked into the male lockerroom. he walked up to a grayish fox. The fox was shorter than Trek by a few inches. His fur was grayish and had a little patch of white coming from the tip of his atoms apple, to the bottom of his belly. he was wearing very-tight revealing blue jeans, and had a see-through vest. He was quite handsome. he also happened to be the youngest worker at this job. "Oh! Mr. Trek! I didn't see you there!" the young gray fox almosted stutterd the words. he tried not looking Trek in the eyes. he felt embarrassed. he took a quick glance up, to see what trek was doing. When he looked up, Trek was staring directly at him and smiling. The younger fox blushed and quickly looked away. "Well ....um.... Mr. Trek, this is my third time on stage. I'm just an amaeteur and i'm already going to work with the famous Trek 'Starr' of the Fox Trot.....I'm sorry if i mess up..." The blushing fox closed his locker and turned to Trek to see he was taking off his clothes. Now fully naked, Trek walked up to the young fox, "You know, you don't have to call me mr. I'm only four years older than you," Trek spoke in a soft voice, flirting with the other fox. "Besides you have a Great body." Trek palmed his ass. "So what's your name?" The younger foxes tail wagged in pleasure. "Strip...", Trek wanted to calm Strip down, but arouse him at the same time. "So Strip, do you like this?" Strip nodded as Trek rubbed his free paw around Strip's bulging package. "I could tell that you'd like this. You know, I don't think you would mess up. Not with an ass like this and such a huge fox-hood." Trek slowly unzipped Strips pants and rubbed his fingers around the rim of his black boxer briefs. He then started to slowly rub down the gray foxes thigh, making sure he doesn't grab the bulge yet. He played around, rubbing Strip's firm ass while slowly pulling down his pants. So as not to give Strip a case of the "Blue balls", Trek decided to get closer to Strip. Now one inch away from each others muzzles,"So, Strip.... hat do you think I should do with this?" He gripped Strip's fox-hood and started to jerk him off. " Should I keep doing this?or should I take it in my muzzle and suck it dry?" Strip gave out this little moan of pleasure. "Or ..........would you like to feel this thick piece going in and out of your tail hole?", Trek grabbed Strip's hand and rubbed it up and down his sheath as tainting as possible. Trek watched Strip as he tried to contain his erection. "This'll be quick" Trek thought to himself. He bent down and slowly and started to trace every inch of Strip's cock head with the tip of his tongue. He then slowly engulfed the head. He began sucking softly. At the same time he began stroking him. With his free hand he cupped Strip's balls and started to go faster. "Uh....unh..uh" The gray fox moaned in complete pleasure. Trek couldn't wait for the salty cum shot. He loved the taste of Strip's cock. Trek started to feel his crotch pulsate. He needed some action.
Strip clenched his teeth. He could feel the climax. He wanted to cum. He wanted Trek to gulp it all down. Strip put his palm on the back of the "talented" foxes head, that signaled Trek to move faster. He did. While Trek was sucking he took his hand of the gray foxes sack and started to maddly masturbate. Strip was closing in. They both moaned at the same time. "I'm......Cu..mmmminnng!!", Strip felt it. Shot after Shot was being swallowed by the kneeling fox. He couldn't swallow it all. Traces slid down the side of his muzzle, but he didn't stop. He kept on sucking and swallowing. Strip felt weak as every drop was sucked out of his balls. Strip slowly removed Treks muzzle off his cock and bent down as he layed Trek on his back. Strip started sucking Treks fox-hood. He felt the thickness of his cock filling up his whole muzzle.Trek moaned in great ecstacy, but still managed to speak. "so...do you still... wanna feel me in you...?", Strip stopped and positioned himself, bending on all fours. Trek kneeled behind him and saw a stripe going down Strips back. It was a red mark. Like a wound. Trek wanted to ask about the scar on Strip's back, but the tantalizing tail that wagged in the air made him look at his throbbing cock and the tail hole for the taking. He decided to, "Shoot first, ask questions later.". He positioned himslef behind Strip, as he slowly rubbed his cockhead around the smaller gray foxes tail hole. Taunting him. Not knowing when that 9 inch thick piece is going in him, made Strip want it even more to cum in him. He felt Trek was ready when the brown fox held him in a firm position. He felt it slowly sliding in him. "Unh..", he moaned as he felt and counted evry inch going in. When the gray fox thought it would be a nice slow fuck, Trek pulled out and then quickly pistoned in and out for a rough ride. Strip clenched his teeth and winced in the excitement. "he's...so...big...", Strip slid off his palms and rested his forearms on the ground, as he cheek slid back and forth against the ground. the gray fox felt his bulge, pulsating. Trek grabbed the younger foxes member and started to jerk and piston at the same time. The pleasure flowed though them. The intensness. Their bodies soon felt connected when the brown fox finally pistoned in, like a spear, his whole 9 inches. "rady for.. a..cum shot?", the brown fox started to shoot load after load of spunk into the belly of the smaller fox. He loved it. They loved it. The feeling of cum shooting up into his anus, made Strip overjoyed with immence and powerful pleasure. Then, Strip shot several loads onto the floor. The brown fox was still pleasing him. He finally let go of the younger foxes cock, and started to lick the sweet "nectar" from his hands. The gray fox slumped to the floor and lyed in his own juices. he turned over to face the brown fox. strip stared up at the glistening light brown fox, sitting on his knees with palms down on the ground. Trek was slightly bent back as he was recovering from the fun they had. the gray foxes ears twitched up as he smelt the musk of the older fox. he loved it. The sweat over their fur mixed with the material on the floor, aroused Strip's nose. Noticing a streak of cum still trickling down trek's muzzle, Strip sat up and licked it off. Not fully open Trek's eyes met with Strip's. Trek sat up, he slowly pulled strip in for a long kiss. Letting go, Trek slowly stood up. He helped the now stunned fox up to his feet. "You know, we only have about 4 minutes till we go on stage.", "OH SHIIT!!! I FORGOT ABOUT THAT!!!" Strip panicked, as he picked up the outfit he was wearing earlier up of the floor. "Hahahaha, calm down. You're working with me, remember? The famous Trek 'Starr' of 'The Fox Trot" Trek walked up and wrapped his arms around Strip's neck and kissed him again.
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Going down the flight of steps, the orange fox started to walk by the kitchen. There were some cooks looking through the kitchen window leading passed the bar. They were watching the stage. there was a fox girl and a fox guy dancing on stage. The orange fox started to walk out a door in the back of the kitchen, when she looked at some bread. She walked back to the cooks and pulled one out of the crowd. looking at the female tigers tag, " Caashey, could you make 2 sandwhiches for me?" The fox put her arm around the tigresses neck. "Sure miss Kila, your the boss." Caashey turned to a counter and pulled out two rolls and a knife. She started to cut open the rolls. "Thanks, put whatever on them." Kila leaned against a wall near the counter. Kila started to look over Caashey's body. "You know, your bodies great. Why aren't you one of my dancers?", she smiled a flirtacious smile. The tigress started to blush as she was putting cheese on the rolls, "Well.... um.... maybe I can show you sometime how good of a dancer I am." She flirted back. "That sounds great. Maybe we can talk about it over a drink, or some lunch.", Kila Kila smiled again. "Sure let me give you my number." The tigress pulled out a pen from her aprin and a napkin from a napkin bin. She wrote her number on the napkin, and handed it to Kila. "So is there anything healthy to drink around here?" Remembering what she came down for. "Yeah, check that back fridge. There should be some bottles of milk."
The fox started towards the fridge. She opened it and inside were some bottles of milk that read 'Rosenbergs chocolate milk'. She pulled out 2 bottles. When Kila returned to the tigress, she was done making the sandwhiches."Here ya go,", She happily handed over the sandwhiches, "but why did you want 2?". "Oh, I'm just relly hungry." Kila fibbed."Thanks for the food, and your number. I'll give you call." She turned and started to sway her tail as she walked out of the kitchen through a door that read 'exit'.
Kila walked into the alley way. She was walking in the direction she remembered were she saw that young fur. While she was walking, she heard some noises. It sounded as if something or someone was being hit. "AUGH!" A little yelp came from the direction of the noise. Kila put the food and drinks in her coat pockets, and started to run in the direction of the noise. When she reached a corner, she slowed down to catch her breath. She started to walk to the other side. She saw three older furs, One wolf and two dogs, were beating up the young fur. Kila became enraged. She bawled up her fists and started to move toward them. "What's wrong faggot!? Get up!", The wolf Growled. he seemed to be the leader. Hearing this, kila started to run at them. One of the dog's noticed her, "What the fu-", Kila punched him before he could finish. "What? Who the Hell are You!?!" The wolf growled again. "I'm the owner of this club, Now get the hell out of my alley or I'm going to have to kick the shit out of your asses.", The tempered fox clenched her fists again. She took her glare off the wolf who seemed to be the leader, and looked down at the weakend cub huddled up in fetal position. "Are you alright?" Kila lowered her fists. He slowly removed his arms from his face. He had blood trickle down from his muzzle and had one eye closed and bruised. He was a really young raccoon. "What da' fuck do you want bitch!?", The wolf spoke with an arrogant attitude. "Bitch, huh? well if you don't get out of here, this bitch'll kick yer asses!" The glare Kila gave to the wolf did'nt intimadate him. "OH YEAH!?!?", the other dog, who's still standing, ran at the fox with a punch. She moved out of the way and with a powerful hit, kicked the dog in the stomach. He fell hard, face first into the ground,"AUGH!". the other dog finally got up off the ground. He went to help his friend. They got up and started to run. "PUSSIES!!!!" the wolf barked at them, "Screw. I can take you down..". Kila looked at the wolf, then the raccoon, he started to sit up. With his one open eye, he looked directly at her. He was scared of her, but happy to see someone fighting for him. his eyes started to teer up. He had a little shine in his eye that made kila drop her guard. She unclenched her fists. The wolf saw and took advantage. He ran up to the fox. kila turned in time to catch a glimpse of his fist before it hit her. The cub turned down his gaze as the vixen was knocked down next to him. the wolf laughed as he walked up to her body. he was quite built for a young wolf of 18 or 19 years of age. "Those 'roids come in handy. makes quicker work of things.", He smiled and laughed again. the raccoon used what little strength he had to jump on the orange foxes body, "NOOO! Leave her alone!", "GET OUT OF MY WAY!!", the wolf's pissed even more. The gray raccoon gripped Kila's coat for leverage, for what he knew was coming. "FAGGOT!", The black wolf kicked the young raccoon in the jaw, with one of his steel toe boots. He flew off of Kila, tearing open her coat, revealing the outfit she wore under. The sandwhiches, which she had in her coat fell out and spread across the floor. She opened her eye's to see the wolf staring at her almost naked body. She tried to lift herself up, but he pounced on her. The black wolf now held her wrists down with one of his gaint black paws. "you know, your bodies hot," he smiled a wicked grin, as he looked over her body again. "I hate it when Treks right! He's always right. Always telling me that if I keep on walking out in public like this, that some freak'll rape me.", She thought o herself as she struggled to get free. With his free hand, he tore off her thong. "GET OFF YOU SICK FREAK!!", she screamed. "Looking at your body is getting me off!", he grinned again as he pulled his own jeans down. "HEEELLLPPP!", She screamed. "BITCH!!! Shut up!!", He picked up a sandwhich from the floor and shoved it inher mouth. "MMHRRRHRR!!!", tears started to swell up in her eyes. "Great! I'm going to be raped by a dirty, Steroid popping, homophobic, rapest!", Kila screamed in her head while still struggling for her life. He started to put his stiff cock in her. She tried to scream again, but the sandwhich muffled her cries of help. He injected his full lenght into her. He started to have fun. the wolf started to speed up. "RAAH!!", the young raccoon ran up and slapped the wolf off of Kila with a metal pole. He rolled over, on to the ground with a loud thud. the cub didn't stop. He lifted the metal pole in hand again and started to pound away at the wolf's gut. kila jumped up and grabbed the pole from the raccoons hands. "STOP! He's bleeding and I think he's knocked out. That's enough."."I HATE YOU!!!!!", the raccoon yelled at the wolf sprawled across the floor in a dirty heap of blood. he started to get up. "Unbelievable!", Kila thought. "BLERGH,BLAGH!", he started to throw up blood, "I'll get you, you little-", before he could finish, Kila pulled her boot back and kicked him, possibly shattering his jaw. He flew back unconcious. The cub fell to his knees, he started to cry. Kila picked up her coat from the ground. She put it on, she would'nt want to walk around nude. "Come on. If you want, you can come home with me and get rid of all that blood and dirt.", Kila's hand extended. "He's.. he's.. he's my brother...", The raccoon stuttered. With eyes wide open, the surprised fox glanced back and forth at the wolf on the ground and the sobbing racoon. With a soft touch to his shoulder Kila asked, "How?, Why?". "I'm adopted... But I don't want to go back!" He turned and buried his face into her coat as she hugged him. "Come on. You can stay at my apartment," Kila and the raccoon started to walk back to the Fox Trot. "By the way, My name is Kila. What' you'rs?", "I'm.. my name is Trotter.". Kila smiled, "How about I call you Trot? hm? You know you should be lucky. I don't bring back every guy to my ap on the first date.", Trot giggled. Kila was happy to hear it.
When the two reached the club, the fox remembered the sandwhiches Caashey had made, "damn, looks like I'm going to have to ask her to make me more sandwhiches.", she smiled. When they got into the kitchen trot was told to stay where he is. "This is no place for a child, I'm going to go get you a change of clothes." Kila walked into another room, swinging door closed behind her. Trot, like all other youngsters, doesn't like staying in one place for too long. He occupied himself by guessing what most of the items in the part of the kitchen he was in, were. He finally looked through a door way, and saw some of the cooks looking through a window. He was curious and went to get a closer look, at what they were so interested in watching. Trot moved in closer, without anyone noticing him. Trot's useful eye, spotted something he's never seen before. It aroused his amusement, but that's not the only thing it aroused. His attention, was on a light-brown fox. His tail was so perfectly clean, as were his movements. The racoon has never seen uch, sensual dancing. The light-brown fox was dancing with a gray fox. They were all over each other. To Trot, the dancing was unique. The idoled fox was removing his shirt, as the gray fox started to remove his pants. "Trek and Strip are amazing together.", a female leopard said with a sigh. "Yeah, I know. Strip's hot for someone so young," a feminine male lion, spoke this time. "You know by the way they're dancing. It seems as if they're trying to, or already had sex.", "You think so? I thought Trek was going out with Kila!" the leopard now in aww. "AS IF! Trek is totally gay! i mean, look at how he dances." the flamboyant lion gestured with hand motions. The raccoon cub wanted to kow the name of th fox he was interested in, so he listened in on the conversation. "He has such perfect fur. his tail is so clean. have you ever seen a straight fur's tail? It's not as clean, ever!" The lion continued, without an audience. the leopardess ignored the lion and started to think aloud, "I wonder how Strip got that huge slash on his back?". Trot started to look for the one with the salsh going down his back. he couldn,'t see it. Both The foxes started to move faster. The light-brown fox was left only in a black thong. trotter finally saw that the gray fox was Strip, when his vest fully came off. Trotter wondered at the thought of ever being with Trek. "HEY!!! Trot I thought I told you to stay put. This is no place for someone of you'r age." Kila pulled trot by his shoulder, as she pulled the raccoon out of his trance. What were you looking at, huh?" Kila smiled and teased trot, watching him blush and answer. "AWWW, the shows done?", the lion complained. "You perv.", the leopardess laughed. "Hey you were watching it too! and checking out Strip might I add.... OH! look at that!" he pointed towards the stage, as Trek pulled Strip in for a kiss before they left the stage. "what, it's over? already..." Trot mumbled under his breath, but not low enough that Kila heard him. "You are... aren't you." Kila asked softly. the raccoon knew what she was going to ask. "Gay... is that why you'r brother hurt you?", The question struck the raccoon's heart like a stray bullet. He concentrated his eye on a spot on the ground. "IT is.. isn't it." Kila started to relize the pain Trot was going through. "Asshole.." she mumbled to herself. "Don't listen to what your brother said to you! He's just an arrogant, Ignorant asshole! You can be and do what you wanna do. Life is your's! So grab it by the balls!!", Trot flinched at the words, imagining Kila gripping his brother's balls till they pop. He started to smile as a tear swelled up in his eye. She wiped it away, "Come on, don't cry. You don't need to. Now here, some clothes. There's a closet full of towels in the locker room on the second floor. But you'll be using my shower in my apartment on the third floor.", Kila handed him a pair of boxers, shorts, and a sleevles shirt. "okay? Well i have to do something now, so I'll come up and check on you later. And if you want, we can talk later." at those words Kila fluffed up the raccoon's head fur and walked out of another door. Trot turned up the steps, and stopped on the second floor. He went inot the locker room to search for the towel closet. He found it next to a door with a lot of steam flowing out from an opening. He heard someone talking in the room, so he walked towards the door and tried to peek in. he couldn't see anything so he listened in. "Hey.......Trek......", Somebody said amongst the steam. "....Trek", Trot thought a litle too aloud to himself. The door swung open, pushing trot backwards. A naked Trek walked out of the steam to confront the spy. He then relized who he was staring at. The cub couldn't help but to look up and down the foxes body. "So....What's you'r name?"
To Be Continued....

Azenis
August 11th, 2005, 06:51 PM
I think putting in more paragraphs would make it much, much easier to read. Put some spaces between the paragraphs, break up the paragraphs into smaller chunks, and it won't give readers eyestrain.

Artemis Engel
August 12th, 2005, 11:56 AM
HeHeh sorry... It was one of my first stories I have ever written. so I just copied from the site I pt it up in. I forgot to go through it and fix it. Thank you for the reply though.

Fun Lovin Furry
September 1st, 2005, 07:15 PM
Quite good actually, you give a good descriptive account of the action and don't rush it like most writers do. Also I think you did well on bulding up towards the action scenes.

But it would benefit from a more paragraphs, so the readers don't feel so overwhelmed.

But apart from a few minor problems I say its pretty good.

Well done, considering its your first story

Artemis Engel
September 2nd, 2005, 01:18 PM
Thank you for the comment. Next time I will make sure to put more spaces between paragraphs. ^_^

Fluffy wolf
September 5th, 2005, 04:39 AM
Great story

Artemis Engel
September 5th, 2005, 01:16 PM
Great story lol, thank you ^^

(CLANED)SilverFox
October 8th, 2005, 09:45 AM
Right, it is good, I am loving the storyline that is happening, minor mistakes, the problem is when is the next part coming out??? :D

Strife767
October 10th, 2005, 03:25 PM
...might want to fix that title up so that it doesn't say "Aggressive hug" >.>;

jumbokoronakid
December 23rd, 2008, 02:08 PM
i think it was great :) now wheres my little fox :)

jumbokoronakid
December 23rd, 2008, 09:41 PM
i really really think you should finish it :)