Poem by the new guy : "White Wolves"

[Blackwolf-Dave]

I apologise for the formatting on my text, but because of the structure of my poem, I felt it was absolutely necessary. If you have trouble reading the bigger letters or colors (for some reason..?) Then you can find it in regular font at the bottom.

This poem is something I created during a long snowday when I was unable to get in contact with my ex Girlfriend (Who is also a furry). It is actually three poems in one.. You can read the whole thing, or only the white writing, or only the black writing.

I also have this poem in JPG format with a picture I drew in the background, I feel it adds to the feel of the poem, and if feedback is positive, then when I become an "Active Member" it will be posted and put into my gallery.

Without further ado:

　
　
White Wolves

Running two
She and he
Coats of white
They live to be
Side by side
Wild and free
In lands of white
Across frozen creeks
Joined together
Always and forever
Not just bodies
But souls mated too
A pair of White Wolves

Me and you

David L****

Regular formatting version:::::


White Wolves

Running two
She and he
Coats of white
They live to be
Side by side
Wild and free
In lands of white
Across frozen creeks
Joined together
Always and forever
Not just bodies
But souls mated too
A pair of White Wolves
Me and you

David L****

I did not leave my last name because I am not comfortable advertising it.. I look forward to some feedback !!

Thanks guys,

Dave

[Blackwolf-Dave]

This seems to be the least active part of the forum... Meh, oh well.

[Blackwolf-Dave]

*Bump for lack af ANY feedback.*

This will be the first and last bump for this one lol if it aint appreciated then it shall fall into the slums of the forgotten prose.