Existence

[Piro]

I had nothing better to call it, but i was in my idealistic creative random rarely seen mood. So i just had to wander off to distant planes and scribble something down. Hope you like it, and or that you get something out of it. Whatever that is, is entirely up to you :)



Who are you to say or think, i'm a freak of nature.

Drilled oil
Raped wood
Wasted soil
Misunderstood

Who are you to judge, weakness and strenght.

Strength to live
Be yourself
Receive and give
Books on a hidden shelf

Weakness to claim the earth
You died during the test.
Misguided from the birth.
You lied to ALL the mirrors, my soul's at rest.

Who are you to decide, for all of us.

Why not what i said, insecure YOU say it's not
bad flavoured ingredients, claimed the melting pot?!
shoot the unknown with a gun, from a bulb in the distance
Underestimated, the ones with logic and persistance
One existence.

[Sinqularis]

Wauw. Must admit I find your poem very interesting, Piro. Not only because you go very much into the depths, but also because your poem is rather uniqe. You keep things short, simply and comprehensive. The lines rhyme. And you've got a smooth rythm as well! Yeah, I've been reading it loud a few times ^_^ Couldn't help it. Your style sure is very different from my own though. But that is one of the things that really makes poetry interesting. Styles differ from one artist to the other. Some artists may create poetry that is similar to eachother, while other artists create something more uniqe and personal. Despite that your style is so different to mine, and what I'm used to look at, I must say I enjoyed reading it. So I'll thank you for sharing your work with us... and I'll hope that you'll let me know if you post more in the future!