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Shasari
January 4th, 2009, 03:49 PM
I wrote this 16 years ago whilst in college as an environmental sciences - ecology major. It was just how I was feeling after reading a particularly ugly article in National Geographic, so I decided to put those feelings into a freeform poem.

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It used to be so;
that almost everywhere you went in Africa
you could see lions.

You'd see them hiding in tall grass,
sleeping in the sun,
drinking from a waterhole,
the cubs frolicking and fighting
in preparation for the day
they would be adults in the pride.

You could see a regal male, the king of beasts,
with his large mane and long black-tipped tail,
standing on the savanna.

You could see the powerful females,
tending to the young,
doing the hunting and providing food
for all in the pride.

Perhaps you'd see the whole pride
feasting on a recent kill.
A grisly sight, yes,
but a necessary one.

Then one day,
you looked around.
"Where are the lions?" you asked.
"I used to see them everywhere."

Then you looked into a camp
and saw a man with seven dead lions on his truck.
In a city, in a small dank shoppe,
you saw paws, heads, and hides
for sale to tourists from other countries.

You ran back out onto the savanna and cried
"Lion, where have you gone?"
There came to you no answer
but the memory of a roar,
echoing off the plains.
Or perhaps it was just the wind........

Benevolent Pudding
January 7th, 2009, 12:54 AM
Well, I don't generally like writings in second person (you this, you that), but you seem to have pulled it off nicely. Although, there's only three dots in an ellipses. Never more, never less. Other than that, it's nice.
This seems to be happening more and more, all over the world. It's sad, really.

You wrote this sixteen year ago? And are just posting it now? O=

etetherin
January 7th, 2009, 10:18 PM
:grin:;-)i-----i-----wish i could rite like that:D

Shasari
January 7th, 2009, 10:35 PM
You wrote this sixteen year ago? And are just posting it now? O=

I'd posted it on a couple of internet forums and on a blog, but no, I've never tried to publish it anywhere - never felt it was really good enough. I'll fix the elipse problem.

I agree, it's quite sad what's happening, I couldn't write that about tigers without becoming a total sobbing sot - I studied big cats and conservation - so I chose to write it about lions, it was still tough writing.

Benevolent Pudding
January 7th, 2009, 11:36 PM
I agree, it's quite sad what's happening, I couldn't write that about tigers without becoming a total sobbing sot - I studied big cats and conservation - so I chose to write it about lions, it was still tough writing.
I'm sure it was tough, that's why I stick to abstract topics, and human nature, and sociopolitical stuff. Not animals.

Shasari
January 8th, 2009, 09:11 AM
:grin:;-)i-----i-----wish i could rite like that:D

*bows in appreciation* Thank you :)