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Nicholay
February 26th, 2009, 09:49 AM
Not so long ago I made a 'Gladiator's prayer' while playing Gladiatus out of boredom. It turned out rather nicely, I think.

Let Ares guide our swords,
Let Athena hear our words.
Our shields withstand all,
In a fight we'll never fall.
May our spirits be as steel,
Never showing what we feel.
Many battles we shall win,
And Zeus shall forgive our sin.
For our victory we shall fight,
Our foes trembling at our sight!

Nicholay
March 4th, 2009, 10:07 AM
OK, why was this thread hidden?

Faolan MacFaoltiarna
March 4th, 2009, 10:38 AM
Not a bad poem. My only nitpick is that the gladiators were Roman, not Greek... and you used the Greek names of the dieties. ;) Otherwise, nice job.

Nicholay
March 4th, 2009, 10:39 AM
Heh, you got me there, thanks for the note.