A Transformers story.

[Khalthar]

This is a link to the stroy that I have posted on another site, because this forum is limited to 10,000 characters per post, and at more than 50,000 words, my story goes way beyond that. so here is the link.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4162967/1/Rebirth_of_Honor (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4162967/1/Rebirth_of_Honor)

Read, enjoy, and please let me know what you think of it so far.

[Khalthar]

Awww, Come on. Some one must have SOMETHING to say about it.

:shock:

[Alphaleader]

Nice, but the Cussing kinda drew me off. But nice effort still.

[Khalthar]

I will admit that I had a hard time coming up with a believable OC. Therefore I based the Character of "Daniel" on myself, and I kept it very accurate as far as what I would do or say in those situations.

The amount of profanity does get toned down a lot in later chapters. Most of it is in chapter one.

[Khalthar]

Come on! Someone must have some kind of comment about the story, you can post it here or on that site. So it's about giant robots instead of furry's, at least check it out. :-(

[Alphaleader]

I guess I was the only one who read it.

[Khalthar]

You've read all eight chapters?

[Alphaleader]

There's eight chapters? .........We'll might as well read'em.

[Khalthar]

Chapter 9 is now posted and ready to read. Here's the link again if anyone needs it.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4162967/1/Rebirth_of_Honor

My account on that website DOES allow for anonomous reviews. Please let me know what you think of the story, there or here.
Thank you for taking the time to look at it. :)

[Khalthar]

Okay chapter 10 is posted and ready to read, chapter 11 is in prgress. Please some 200 pleople have at least looked at this post not counting myself, so someone must have SOMETHING to say about the story, even if ya don't like it. I will admit that it's my first attempt at any kind of story, but I think it's pretty good so far and apparently so do many others, so at least give it a look, please. :cry: